Argument Analysis Essay

Description

*   You have a very clear thesis and purpose and good supporting reasons. I think the evidence you have incorporated into the essay is well selected.   *   I do think there are parts that can be condensed a bit. I would like to see more paraphrase and summary with your source material   *   Your essay is missing a concession and counterargument so make sure you include that in your final draft   *   The format of your essay including the works cited looks great