Cmms essay

Proof reading and editing of file. According to this feedback :-
Hi, this is a promising draft. At this stage the main thing you should do is proofread everything before you submit your work to make sure all of your points come across clearly, as some of your writing is quite tricky to follow. You should also double-check your citations, and check your work against the brief to make sure you haven’t left anything important out. If you still have time before the deadline, you should also think about more fully expanding your analysis as this part of your assignment could show further depth. Including some pictures or screenshots of the examples of advertising that you are discussions could also be helpful to reduce the need for lengthy description of the examples you are covering.