The assignment is a Lecture Review on the Lecture I attached above it is 3 Videos
These are things I did wrong on the previous 2 reviews and the grades he gave me
I don’t know if you ever read my comments on your first paper, or reviewed them before submitting this one: it seems not. You do the same thing: give loosely impressionistic opinions in a casual tone with alot of weak verb constructions (it is, etc.), which would be fine as a spoken comment in class or in an exam essay, but not as a formal review, where style, organization, content, all matter. You have a good sense of the main issues of the work and the lecture, but don’t bother to work at your prose.
Grade: B-, again. I would prefer to see some improvement.
What happened here? This is a lecture review but it provides no sense of the lecture and how Prof. Singer, who you mention in the first and last sentences, approaches the text, which you summarize repeatedly with the same basic details. You have to go deeper. It’s only a two page essay! Your first paragraph is good, despite the two instances of passive voice, but I made comments on that opening as a draft. You have to then take the lessons and absorb then. You don’t even mention the lecture? How was it organized? Did he use images? Did he introduce historical material? What questions did Singer, a philosopher, raise? How did he answer them? You have space to add more detail, but you have to discuss the lecture itself (hence, lecture review) and the content, which is the assigned text. Summary of basic situation was good as far as it goes.
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