Dear writer. The file attached above was a first draft write up on a rich point research paper. But i got a feedback on it saying I need to be specific on one gesture within a specific group of people or culture. You will need to edit it and build on it a 6 pages reads each paper. Here is the feedback I Rceived on the first write up that is attached above. Please send me a copy of the edited short write up and a copy of the 6 pages research paper. Let me know if you need anything.
Khaled, You still need to select one gesture to study. You will get better information if you focus on one so that you can explore the different situations in which it is used and how people understand it and respond to it. Before you move on, please let me know which gesture you choose for your research. Try to pick one that has more complicated usage and that could be used in multiple ways. For example, could one of them be used when someone is being serious but also as a joke? Again, please email me or respond to this comment with which gesture you will focus on for the rest of your research and for your final paper. I am happy to talk with you about your project if you have questions. Let me know
Khaled, if you respond to your TA Eileen and then revise your rich point topic and research, you can recoup points for this part of the project. FYI: This write-up is worth 5 points out of the total 110 points for the whole rich point project. The topic choice was 5 points, and the final paper is 100 points.