Primary source of assesment

Consider the feedback below provided by the instructor:

1.The section that addresses academics in Bangladesh is the most fully developed. There are a number of statements lacking clear detailed analysis and support.

2.What are the specific lessons that you study?

3.What have your learned in detail?

4.Where would you travel? Why?

5.Define happiness.

6. lacking in clarity

7.Assignment lacks conclusion

8.Writing is flaccid. (Lack of concrete nouns, stout adjectives and/or action verbs,) Sharpen sentences Sharpen paragraphs (Cut it in half)

9.No direct quotation or partial quotation

10.Punctuation, errors in dictionary

11.Incorrect font and format