Just write step two
Step one was written by another writerbefore, but he didn’t do well.
I already uploaded the step one this is the comment by professor for step one:
This is a good start on an important topic. There are a few issues, however: 1. Please put your name, et cetera onto a title page. 2. Please do NOT use section headings: “Gender Equality,” “Inadequate Employment opportunities,” et cetera. 3. Please work on the next steps of this assignment with a tutor from the Academic Success Center. I’m having difficulty understanding your writing. Reach out if you have questions.
This is rubric:
Step 1 has 391 words, I need 1340 words in total, so you need to add 949 words.
This is library link: http://library.jefferson.edu/gutman.cfm
Account: shen9562@philau.edu
Passwords: Wkl1161sy!+
Make sure check grammar error.
Help me modify the grammar of step one, thank you